Good poem. Wonderfully written. Loved your choice of words. I really like the use of personifcation. That's very effective.
Good Job! 5/5

-Shannon <3

Oh, this has such great flow and rhythm AND rhyme. i really liked this. this is truly a beautiful poem. the visuals are nice. i will vote if i am still allow, and i will add this to my favorites. it is unique. =] cliche poems are overrated, even though i like most of them anyway. =] variety is always good.

i saw a couple of errors though. overlook is one word, you had it as two. and then since you copied and pasted your poem, the computer gets those weird symbols...

a majoorrr 5/5.

[ps- thanks for the lovely comment. that's got to be one of my favorites, not becuz it's saying im good, but its just the way you wrote it. ]hehe

Awesome imagination!

5.5**
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