Tomorrow [It Will Heal] - Acrostic

by Twisted Heart   Aug 21, 2007


Tomorrow [It Will Heal] - Acrostic
By: Twisted Heart

Torn dreams have filled the vacancy inside my shattered soul
One tear has tipped the emptiness upon the heart it holds
Mere words have come to comfort me upon this lonely night
Opaque blue haze that covers all the rays of hidden light
Reminders of the love we felt way back when we were young
Resound against the hunger that has left our lives undone
Of all the pain that we survived where is the hope we shared
Wasteful wreckage of the heart remain in disrepair.

Inside the mind that quivers is a need to finally see
Tenderness upon the soul to mend and to set free

Wishful of a happiness that grows so strong inside
Invading all the memories that I want to hide.
Lingering reflections of the choices that I made
Long lost among the pain coursing through my yesterdays

How do I find the truths among the shatters of a lie
Entombed upon the heart with no form or alibi
Are they just pure illusions of a life that I once knew
Long lost until tomorrow with the dreams of loving you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Oh the truth and wisdom, the honest insight you've captured here! Stunning. I can so relate to the emotions and meanings of this piece. A fantastic poem, an incredible acrostic. This poem has settled deep inside me.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Jeannie,
    Where did you hide the Kleenex? Geesh, that was so intense. These lines are so amazing and speak volumes that death can seperate even the most perfect of marriages.
    At least this was my perception of these two lines.

    ^^Of all the pain that we survived where is the hope we shared
    Wasteful wreckage of the heart remain in disrepair.

    As always Jeannie, you are one of my favorites and this is why. ...The ability to make me feel every ounce of emotion that you spill into your poems. Thank you, and wonderful job,
    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    What a fantastic piece. The emotions really hit you right in the heart.

    Wishful of a happiness that grows so strong inside
    Invading all the memories that I want to hide.
    Lingering reflections of the choices that I made
    Long lost among the pain coursing through my yesterdays

    These lines were amazing. I am always looking for my yeterdays. Like Luanne I needed the tissues also.
    ~BRAVO~
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Wooooooot I get to be the first to comment this amazing piece!

    Jeannie between your poem and Cindy's tonight I seem to need a lot of tissue.

    Inside the mind that quivers is a need to finally see
    Tenderness upon the soul to mend and to set free
    ^^^
    I love these 2 lines. I love the entire piece(though it set my emotions on fire) it was an amazing read!
    Though all your poetry sparks emotion ... this one just ... I can't even begin to express the feeling it gave me.

    Excellent read as always Auntie!
    Luanne

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