Wow.
thats an amazing poem.
check mine plz xXx

This is so deeply emotionally moving-it really touched my heart. It is so sad, yet has an underlying positive note as evidenced in the last two lines of the first four stanzas. This is the pain and love and honesty of baring one's soul. Great piece.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Awwwwwwwwww
thats sooo sad
just my eyes making rain - awwww

i really like this well done xx

Beautifully written piece
I really liked the way you started off each stanza with "will not cry for you". Pefect flow throughout the attire. Also, the emotion was so powerful.

"Will not cry for you
My mind clouded with pain
For these are not tears
Just my eyes making rain"
^^my fav stanza. Loved it

Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
5/5