I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM.... I LOVE WHAT IT IS SAYING XX

To be honest this has all the emotion of a poem but to me it just seems like words and ramboling on...
just my opinion.

choi!

There is a lot of emotion in this especially anger. but i get how there are people who aren't afraid to say what they think of you and they are quick to give you a title and everything but in the end they are more affraid of you and they are hypocritze. people say things but when they are put up to it they can never actually do it. loved your poem! 5/5! beautiful piece of poetry!

I see it as more than ramblings. it's strong and comlex revealing the inner layers and truth beneath societies bullies and their cowardly attributes. perfect format for the point being made xox

I actually really liked that. Nice work.
So true......

I am going to be straight, honest, and give you a constructive criticism. I see anger, desolateness, and strong emotions literally yelling out of this computer screen. However, I feel as though you are just rambling on and on.

I understand that this is a free write, but you have some grammar, punctuation mistakes that you must tend to in the poem. Punctuation and grammar is very important. Still, I like the poem because it comes from inside you and you obviously poured out your heart into this poem.

It's not excellent because you have mistakes in there. It is not bad either for it has emotions. It is not poor nor good. It's just... fair.

I like the emotion. That is all.

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