Great poem, the flow is great and the meaning is also very clear. Keep it up. Correct the first line by adding "do".

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This was really good, the emotions you felt for this person really showed. Your title was really great for this poem too, questions were everywhere. Great job!
I really liked this, yet you lost your flow at the very last sentence:(
But everything before was amazing.

There is so much emotion through out the entire poem and in doing that it makes the reader feel the same way...great job!

This is a great poem i can really feel all of your emotions in this one! Your a very talented person and i have to add you to my favorites after reading this poem great job!