by Somber Esprit Aug 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I told you something |
by Sherry Lynn
Ohhh... this is beautiful.. so sad and full of pain and emotions... the desire to set right what we have accidently somehow wronged... |
by Fsams
Very nice poem. I loved the rhetorical questions whic really engaged me. 5/5 for your good work |
Another amazing poem. I have no idea how to explain what I'm feeling with poem, I really liked it, because a couple years ago I was sexually assulted by my uncle and I told my boyfriend about it cause he was hearing stories and now he won't shut up about it...But anyway, You expressed this one really well, And the flow and wording was incredible..Really great job on this piece... |
by Phil
Great write really enjoyed it |
Totally love it. x3 |