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by Live WeLL
Wow this is an amazingly powerful poem and very very nicely written.. it is just filled with emotion and it really is a very deep poem.. very nice job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =] |
Wow. flawless |
by Becca
I loved this poem. It was so somber and mellow. Smooth and flowed gracefully amd effortlessly. |
by Lonesomeme
Omg, that poem was very awesome!! definately a 5/5!! I enjoyed the last stanza: |
by Edward D Zurovec
Very sad poem. Told a horrifying story, The first stanza asks the question and last Finishes in Sadness. |
Wow that was amazing, I loved this poem. The imagery behind it was so incredible. And the emotions, omg.. It was really nice to read this piece... |
Very deep and dark. I can relate to the girl... 5/5 |
by Fsams
Mounful and explicit, so real and lucid poem. I love the way you have written it. I gave you 5/5 |
by Sherry Lynn
This is so sad... I can feel the anguish and even guilt that this poem exposes... |