Comments : Emptiness

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Your poems are so powerful..i really enjoy reading them...keep it up!=]

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Really powerful piece! Everything just goes so well together. Emotions set perfectly and it just goes through to readers mind, which is really good! Amazing piece
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by kaida clover

    Really well done.. its sad but a great piece of writing.. powerful emotion threw out

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Aswome... this one kind of made me think.
    this piece is sad but at the same time its like you kno wat to say. excellent flow it was like you drawn me in so fast that i was like is this my piece or hers? =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Ill always be here so think about, it if i am here and ur there. r u still feeling emptyness?