If I could write a poem,
Would you help me understand,
Watch my eyes when they get lonely,
Know just when to hold my hand,
You've been my wings, my strength for so long,
And I'm now too scared to stand,
Please be gentle...with me.
But my eyes they cherish only you,
And my heart will do whatever you want it to,
You know that I'll only ever see through,
All the bad shit that's due to you.
I Love You...
That is all I need to say,
No matter what,
I will always stay,
It won't change just how I feel,
When the world's burn down what I conceal,
Baby, hold me tonight,
I know we'll be alright
Just hold me tonight,
I'm a little scared,
But I'll be forever yours,
If I would write a poem,
Would you help me understand,
Watch my eyes when they get lonely,
Know just when to hold my hand...
Heyy;
Nice poem I liked it.
But honestly I HATE it when people
correct my poems, I wrote it, I obviously
want it that way.
But I know not everyone feels that way.
I just wanted to say that it is a very lovely poem, and i adore most that you write.
But i dont think you should ever put
swear words in your poetry.
And i must admit i do swear alot, It just takes the whole meaning away from it.
But other than that it was great, and i have followed your poetry for a while now, and noticed how much you are progressive.