Heyy;
Nice poem I liked it.
But honestly I HATE it when people
correct my poems, I wrote it, I obviously
want it that way.
But I know not everyone feels that way.
I just wanted to say that it is a very lovely poem, and i adore most that you write.
But i dont think you should ever put
swear words in your poetry.
And i must admit i do swear alot, It just takes the whole meaning away from it.

But other than that it was great, and i have followed your poetry for a while now, and noticed how much you are progressive.

Have a gooden'