Comments : Unfamiliar Territory

  • 17 years ago

    by katy

    I like this poem well written babe :) 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by katy

    I like this poem well written babe :) 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    It is o.k. It isn't best poem that I read but it is interesting. I don't like some lines.

  • 17 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    I really feel the passion here, the warmth that comes from the images you give, it is much deeper even after I reflect over it. Good short one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I think it was a very good poem. Using the last words as the title is really effective, well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent my dear poet. The word choice is superb and the connotations evoked by the lexis makes this piece outstanding. 5/5 all the way

    I love your style
    Fsams

  • Short and sweet is an accurate term for this poem, nicely written and a good portrayal of feelings.

    5/5 for this one, well done :)

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Short and sweet. i loved this poem. nicely done. =]