I WISHED:..

by cassanova   Aug 21, 2007


I wished...

i wished i was your lip gloss,
cause a kiss is due everyday,
but just again its gonna happen,
I'll end up useless and thrown away...

i wished i was your eye liner,
for that moment we were eye 2 eye,
but that doesn't work for me,
i would have such a short lifetime...

i wished i was your belt on your waist,
but second thoughts its just a waste,
a belt is just another accessories,
that you'd surely soon replace...

i wished i was your mirror,
I'd be the first to see your face,
bad idea the more i think,
i would watch myself be replaced

i wished i was your turtleneck sweater,
unlike the others i like this one better,
as long as you loved that turtleneck,
i could smell and kiss you forever...
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..please rate/comment second version of "I WISH"

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    I really liked it alot.. Good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    I liked thatt!! i liked how every stanza had to do with something different.. great work, 5/5 from me, keep it upp

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    That's really cute

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You are a great writer cassanova and even though you have no opinion whatsoever about my poems I am going to keep reading yours because they are great!

    Take care,

    5/5

    Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I like this one too! I really loved the idea for these two poems, its really unique=]