Once upon a life

The flow and beat of the poem is very good. i like it. just not as much as the others, thats not mean disrespectfully. but i actually don't no what to say about it. :[

The concept was good, the flow was decent except it got a little repetitive... and the word choices were great! 5/5 :P

I didnt particularly like this one.. i dont think its your best..i've seen you write better.. it just didnt catch my interest.. but i still give it a 4/5

I thought it was very great, the rhyming was very good, and the flow was magnifique, and i loved the repition, and i just wanted to keep on reading, another well deserved 5/5

Stephanie Naylor

Good poem, where did you get the inspiration from?