Its a change reading a short poem from you i always set myslef up for a story filled with emotions, here it hits you like a mac truck but before you know what happend its gone :) i like it :)) 5/5

"I wear a smile as my disguise"
I like this line, i think everyone has went through at least one point in there life where they have done this.
I get from the poem though that you have nothing to be ashamed off. Great poem, so much emotion crammed into one, just abrupt to the point and prefect.

Kelly
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