Farah, as usual i am speechless. i am just blown away by the depth of the emotion and the meaning of the words. If my writing ever reached this level my life would be complete.

This poem flowed so beautifully and left me mesmorized...fantastic job!

Brooke<3

Oh, wow, this is filled with emotions, I'm breathless. You always have great wording in your pieces, and this one is not an exception. Truly excellently written love poem.
My favorite stanza is the third.
You created amazing atmosphere through the poem.
5/5 from me, keep up!

Wow this was awesome... I would have to say that this would probably be one of my favorite poems that you're written! 5/5!
lyl~Danni~