I loved you

by xXnimXx   Aug 21, 2007


I said 'i love you'
you said it back
i said 'you're my world'
you said it back

i gave you my everything
you made an effort
i made you my everything
you made an effort

that effort went away
it wasnt long at all
but you never really loved me
you loved my looks

you slagged me with your friends
a few joined in
a few took my defence
u didnt care that i loved you

you wanted one thing
when i loved you with all my heart
you'd do anything for that one thing
including hit me

one night you got nasty
it haunts me to this day
you punched you hit you kicked you slapped
it hurt in more ways then the obvious

you took away my faith in guys
which was wrong
you're one a*****e
in with a few good guys

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  • 17 years ago

    by lovexthexwayxyouxlie

    Awww hun i lvd dis poem so gud nd sad.u no i lv u nd im here 4 u.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

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