It'll all be over

by bRiNgMeToLiFe   Aug 21, 2007


I wish sometimes..
that I was someone else.
That there was no pain,no love I was trying to gain
And that I didnt always feel like I would go insane.

I want all of this to go away
I don't know how much more I can take
It's like I'm in a hole and I don't know the way out

I can't do this anymore.
I'm about to give up.

I can't hang on.
The tears are slowing down.
I reach for the razor
It'll all be over now
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  • 16 years ago

    by ScarredToTheBone

    Great poem! 5/5 the emotion is overpowering an dthe message is true. great phrasing- keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by heidi

    Nice job.
    :)

    you have talent.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I COULD'ND HELP NOT READING THIS AGAIN ITS SO GOOD READ MY BIG BLACK
    HOLE ITS RELATABLE

  • 17 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Lol
    okay.
    well some of it was just at the time
    and parts of it were the way I USED to feel./
    I dont want to kill myself anymore.
    in fact im starting to love life again :)
    but Every once in a while the feeling comes back
    and idk..
    If you want to know more just pm me:)

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this one. It is fulled with emotions, mostly sadness. The second stanza is my favorite I especially like the first two lines:
    -I wish sometimes..
    that I was someone else.- I think that you should put ... at the end of that lines, that would add great effect to that thought.
    The poem is greatly written, it could be little longer, but it is very powerful.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me

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