Yes I understand it, but I think I have my own meaning to it, not as yours is. Even though it is a small touch to the poem I like the end words you put it (), I think it is a nice touch.

I don't know what too say.
Your word use was strong, and the flow good.
This poem at first was confusing but then I read it again and I understood it.
It a very unique and interesting write, and intense one at that:).

Your very creative,
Keep it up.
Elaine. 5/5

I love how it's kind of an abstract poem, so really it could mean a number of things to a number of different people.
But I read your explanation and it's just really inspiring that you took something like that a created a beautiful poem.
You're writing is just amazing. There is so much emotion and depth put into it.
I definitely don't believe you're fourteen lol.
Never quit, this is for sure your calling.
5/5.

Even though it did not make full sence to me I'm still glad I read it because it was just one of those poems that didn't have to be totally clear to understand you know
5/5

This was just amazing! I found myself agreeing with every line you told. I'm in my senior year of high school and I could truly relate to everything you described. The style you choose was fresh and interesting and I honestly found myself compelled to continue reading.

My fave stanza had to be without a doubt
Want what isn't; wish for a falsity,
Loathe happiness, love despair,
> Embrace reality.
Cry when the sun is out; smile as the rain pours,
Burn every joyful memory;
And memorize what isn't anymore.
(See it.)

The smiling when the rain pours was brilliant.

well done *5/5*

Oh my, i LOVE the imagery and basically the whole pome, itself! It's different and totally real and true!!!

5/5 babe keep it up!

Great poem.Very unique and creative.I agree that it can mean different things to different people,which just makes it one of the best.Usually you see poems based on one topic and if you havent experianced it,then you can't enjoy the poem to it's fullest extent.
Great job,5/5,
Keep writing,
Miranda