Lasting Love (Part 2, The Love Series)

by Corruption   Aug 22, 2007


While we dated,
We felt sure of one thing...
That our love,
Was a lasting love.

Though we were overwelmed,
We last for months.
With times of pain,
Yet, we forgave and forgot.

The we came to,
The dreaded day.
When we decided,
to stop, and depart.

So thats when we ended
The beginning of us,
And now we go on to,
The middle and climax.

*2nd part in the Love Series
again plz note the title, it will come in handy at the end of the series*

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  • 17 years ago

    by damont

    Hmmm. through all this pain and everything u been through what made u depart from each other?

  • 17 years ago

    by Sydney

    Aha. I love how you always end it like that = ] Its different, and I like that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Better flow with this..though i would think the ending of the love would be the ending of the story not the climax..but i guess i will have to wait and see...keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I thought it was great, awesome, it sounds like a great series 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    LovE iT! iT iS beautifuL!!! keeP uP yR lovelY thoughtS iN expressionS anD outlooK....

    diS iS luzaN

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