Wow! This is good!

Oooo... twisted! But cool. Nice build-up!
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I was going to say something quite poetic but i cant remember it i love it nice hidden subtle hints and meanings :)

Reading it again i think its fantastic and describes somewhat what i feel :) well done

I like how you.. ehh, how do you say that xD You start from one part.. and just add stuff to that one part and then turn it around.. like something different.. well.. I'm having a hard time giving comments today, I just like the poem =P
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5/5

Like it !