Naww, this is a unique poem, I don't think I've read one like this... Which is a good thing because you have a unique way of writing poems =) 5/5 Keep up the good work

Love the poem keep on writting 5/5

Wow!! this poem is soo awesome and its very open hearted. i like how you use one second and its just awesome. good job!! love it

GOOD PO3M FOR A START3R !!!! K33P ON WRITING I 3NJOY R3ADIN UR WORK !!!