Wow interesting and unique 4/5

I love how you changed it up and made the last stanza two lines as opposed to four... but overall it has this interesting structure that proves to be very effective--great work

Yes Damn It.... you two are definitely meant to me.... now keep it that way!! geesh

Breathtaking

Wow, honestly i really love this poem. The words you used and the way you wrote it is just amazing. Truely its one of my favorite poems. It is short but so powerful and very heart warming with a lot of emotion!

Sir you just took my heart and wrote on it what I am thinking, what I have experienced. It is well written that these two people are meant to be no matter what, because without it nothing would work elsewhere in the world. I really like this poem.

This poem is wonderfully written. You created superb atmosphere and described emotions excellently. It is really beautiful.
Well done! 5/5

You closed it perfectly..I mean that was on point!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Were talking about me? I know that you want me Greenie but I'm sure we can be. HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA

Seriously....the first two lines of the third stanza took my breath away...you got something here buddy!!!!!! I'd like to read all of them!!!!!! One day when I have more time!!!! So...about that...

Beautiful write!!!

Must be 5/5!!! Real deal!!!

I definiatley know what you mean, love your poems, so i was wondering if you could give me some feedback on some of mine, it would be greatly appreciated

LOVE IT