Nice poem.. I can feel your pain in it! you really put a lot of feelings in it!.. 5/5
P.S.: I'm really sorry for your terrible lost..

Aww i'm sorry. I know how u feel on one part. I lost my dad but i know it hurts to lose both of them. Great job. 5/5
-vino

p.s. ever need someone to talk to i'm here most of the time lol