by Beauty In The Breaking Aug 22, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
As the tears fall from my golden eyes |
by mikaella
WOw your imagery is great and it kept me hooked ilove it! you should comment my poems |
I like the flow of this piece very much. Whole poem is greatly written, with excellently created dark atmosphere. The imagery in it is very vivid. |
by Ingrid
Beautiful poem, I went all quiet inside while reading it! |
by Elapsed
Another great piece from you. a very enjoyable read the whole way through.. great job |
by Nix
Incredibly written poem! You have one mistake in the third stanza, you used word -sky- two times and that destroys flow. I like the topic, atmosphere is amazing and it is really haunting. Last two stanzas are greatest. |