Very nicely written, another very well put together poetry. Nice portrayal of emotions.

5/5 well done :)

Well done ... you're damn good

What a change at the end very clever x x x

Love your poem!~ talking about student years, teenage love! SWEET! (o:

This is really a nice penned!!
keep up the ood work.

God bless u

This is agreat
great story line to it
it caught my attention and held it
through the ending wasnt what i expected
most people wouldnt have desrcibed the feeling
as frustration
probably depression
anger, suicidle i dont know
but i wasnt expecting frustration
tis good no matter
and thx for the comment:D:D
and glad you wrote another poem

Keenan
ps i was wondering is there two of you in this one account??

Really so sad, but its flowing well and very descriptive. I like how you have described the whole thing. Yep its really a frustation but worth 5/5 :)

Tc
Fsams

It's very sad to see someone you love holding another hand. This is a very nice poem and I'm loving it. i'm sorry if it is a true story.

Yeah.. Well done frends.. 5/5 for this poem.. Yeah, meaningfullly from a poet's heart.. Goodluck and happy weekend to both of you..

Very well written 5/5 deep and meaningful

Your friend,
xD
~NinjaGirl~

You get 5/5 keep it up.

You get 5/5 keep it up.

I can say that your a great poet... i give you 5/5 for that,...

Innocent ,simple and real!!!!!!! i luved it so..:)

Great poem.
Deep emotions, very well discribed.
A great piece or writing.
Take care

Wow, didnt see that comin, good write and clever ending, not bad at all :)

I don't feel these verses truly rhyme, but it is not the point here.

The beginning describes pure yet deep friendship I love for it's innocence and for that many people did experience it.

The end shocked me for that it is a bit indolent but deeply disappointing. This disillusion haven't led to suicide or something tragic. However it shocked his candid soul. And that's worse.

Great!

I really loved this 5 stars!! Oh and thank you for your comment.

How innocent!! this poem is. and its simply great. dear nazeer here i just wat to say you to panned your . just do not submit the poem panned also i mean fromat and givr them the shape of stana. hope you got it what i want to say you.
anyways. great job 5/5

That is so sad
0.0

so raw and just so sad