Perceptual

by janiL   Aug 22, 2007


.alone in the dark
he drowns in the echoes
.echoes of silence
whisper of winds
.whispers of thoughts
that deafens his senses
.his body is still
his mind drifts afloat
.carried on endless
on a journey unbound
.his thoughts driving wildly
to destinations unsound
.a mind of heart blinded
by emotions of peak
.a height filled of tremors
a fall numbed by pain
.his mind a frail wanderer
yet his gaze but a blank
.till darkness consumes him
his thoughts there remain
...

~waahh!! no fancy words..
~no rhyme either..
~i think i'm losin it..T__T
~halp!
~but this ain't nonsense... never..=)

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this piece is very effective and unique. Whole poem is greatly written, and it contains very vivid imagery.
    My favorite lines are:

    -.alone in the dark
    he drowns in the echoes
    .echoes of silence
    whisper of winds
    .whispers of thoughts-

    Atmosphere of the whole piece is somehow haunting.
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Nah ... you're not losing it! Far from it. Nice job.

    till darkness consumes him
    his thoughts there remain

    Great lines!