I really enjoyed readin this deep and emotional poem very well written, love the word u have chosen to describe in it :) 5/5 xx

That was amazing, the choice of words was so powerful, and you convey so much meaning. I truly found this poem stunning. Keep up the amazing work

This poem was so amazing. I couldn't possibly describe how amazing i think it is with words alone. the vocab was outstsanding as well as the flow. the imagery was simply astounding and.. i dunno, something about this poem is. .breath taking. a superb write! 5/5.

Lovely.
Nice vocabulary
that was probably my favorite part
your words were interesting
and they certainly got my attention
flow was pretty good
everything seemed to go together
I'm not really seeing any mistakes that
I can point out
keep writing
5/5
kaila

Impressive! Rhyming is close to perfect. Love the vocab. Here in there the wording took a few tries for me to read it right. 5/5

Good work

I love the imagery your painted in your beginning two lines. It captured my attention and I was eager to read more. The words you used fit the mood of the poem perfectlly and the flow you created was just flawless. Well done *5/5*

I loved this...i could feel the emotion put into this...it caputred my attention really fast..i loved it great job!