Wow i can totally relate great job this poem had a lot of strong feeling i am not so sure about the ryhme scheme though....but i am not one to be talking =] i love this poem its really good i couldn't stop reading. as i read it it kind of unraveled in front of me. 5/5 |
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Mmmm. beautiful shae. =] |