Amazing poem is this, excellent expressions are given, I am really proud to serve you with my comments so as to ascend this poem with more reputations.... Keep up your pretty good writing and looking forward more like this...

Its we,

Luz and Naz
(the two dimensions)

Great poem. I can feel you emtions through this poem. Keep up the good wrok. 5/5

xoxoxo
jess

Very Deep emotional poem, i really like it hun! :-)
Keep it up ok! :-)

Danielle
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Wow This poem is so good!! It is going in my favorite poems section!! Keep up the good work!!

5/5