Death by Heartache

by ben thompson   Aug 22, 2007


A broken heart wracked by agonizing cries.
Echoing through consciousness compounded by lies.

Journey through heartaches lonely rotten core.
Searching for answers, finding only closed doors.

Lost in eternity's forest stranded all alone.
Destiny frowns upon me, scared I'm on my own.

Trees shimmer in the breeze across stars untamed.
Compassion beat out by pride, only me to blame.

Will broken and shattered thinking of a way to die.
Devastated by darkened solitude, awaiting my good byes.

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  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Now thats a haunting one but very well written indeed.

    thanks for all your lovely comments.

    keep writing friend

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I look up to your writing so much...but this poem was exceptional 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a fantastic piece. The emotions cry from your words.
    Trees shimmer in the breeze across stars untamed.
    Compassion beat out by pride, only me to blame.

    Will broken and shattered thinking of a way to die.
    Devastated by darkened solitude, awaiting my good byes.

    These lines cut right through my heart.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

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