Ben
What a fantastic piece. The emotions cry from your words.
Trees shimmer in the breeze across stars untamed.
Compassion beat out by pride, only me to blame.

Will broken and shattered thinking of a way to die.
Devastated by darkened solitude, awaiting my good byes.

These lines cut right through my heart.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

I look up to your writing so much...but this poem was exceptional 5/5

Now thats a haunting one but very well written indeed.

thanks for all your lovely comments.

keep writing friend

all the best and take care