What a very heartbreaking piece. Brought tears to my eyes.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Loved that poem.. keep it up !!

I wish I could hug you right now. I think you need one. I know you don't really know me. But I cant help but want to hug you and tell you everything will be alright. Maybe im just crazi lol but just letting you know what im feeling.

Kyanna

Awesome poem! that kinda happened to me, only without the engagement ring part but yeah everything else did happen, i love the way you write, keep writing and i too will keep reading : )
dani

Aww lol i feel the same about my dam love i'm lonely thou lol but im waiting until someone comes to me ya know lol kinda made me cry idk y your poems are very touching

Ur poems might be long but they r amazing and i get caught in them:) u might go in my favs. i rly rly love ur poems.

Wow amazzing poem...long poem but you kept me reading to the last word. you made me feel your pain i loved it keep it up girly! 5/5 <33