by simplyshay Aug 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My world has ended; |
by Lady Nik
I like this. It's simple, but I feel your pain. I can relate to having my heart broken. You tell your story well. Nice work. Nik |
by Cross
Man so much pain...It really connects with the reader, I know the pain. Well written. |
by pookiengurgi
I'm so sorry you had to feel like that during your break up....seriously depressing poem.but it's really good...vivid |
Excellent writing... |