My Misery

by simplyshay   Aug 22, 2007


My world has ended;
but yours keeps spinning.
My life is over;
but you keep living.
My heart is broken;
my hopes are gone.
All i do is cry;
yet you keep going on.
I drown in my sorrows;
I'm in the pits of despair;
all i need is a breath of fresh air.
I fight for whats left of my pitiful lie;
but it doesn't matter;
i haven't an ounce of pride.
I need you now;
i needed you then;
help me, please, lend out your hand.
Its too late;
Ive fallen too far;
into the misery of my broken heart.

* i wrote this on the first day of summer last year, because i was going through a very rough breakup*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like this. It's simple, but I feel your pain. I can relate to having my heart broken. You tell your story well. Nice work. Nik

  • 16 years ago

    by Cross

    Man so much pain...It really connects with the reader, I know the pain. Well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    I'm so sorry you had to feel like that during your break up....seriously depressing poem.but it's really good...vivid

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Excellent writing...

    Me the , 1st vote, the 1st to comment on this lovely thrilling writing. Keep up your superb writing and bring us more lovely poems in the near futur.

    Luzan and Nazeer
    'the two Dimensions'

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