Excellent writing...

Me the , 1st vote, the 1st to comment on this lovely thrilling writing. Keep up your superb writing and bring us more lovely poems in the near futur.

Luzan and Nazeer
'the two Dimensions'

I'm so sorry you had to feel like that during your break up....seriously depressing poem.but it's really good...vivid

Man so much pain...It really connects with the reader, I know the pain. Well written.

I like this. It's simple, but I feel your pain. I can relate to having my heart broken. You tell your story well. Nice work. Nik