Oh I love it. I usually prefer things that rhyme (I know I'm so classic) but I enjoyed the imagery in this one and some of it reminded me of my Hide and Seek poem. I loved picturing it. Five.

I love it.great job.i could picture it in my head as i read this.keep up the great work.

This is a great poem...it flowed perfectly... the flow wasnt off once in this entire poem which makes it enjoyable to read...and there was some imagery to this piece....excellent job. 5/5 from me =]

WOW!! Amazing poem, your vocabulary was awesome very creative. Your lines flowed very nicely and I really like your imagery, great job. Keep it up.

Wow!!! I am impressed! I don't prefer love poetry but this isn't classic love poem which is great. Wording is excellent and atmosphere that you created is amazing. You have very unique style of writing. You expressed emotions greatly.

I'm speechless. This poem is going to my favs.
It's greatly written, so emotional. I like the imagery in it a lot, every stanza holds very vivid descriptions and images. This is one of the best love poems I've read in a while.
My favorite stanza is:

-A puppet master with strings made of words,
You put on the greatest show of them all.
Blinding the world left and right,
Dazzling me with that crooked smile.-

Keep writing, 5/5 from me :)

Excellent!

WooT!... i love this one..realy great....and i can relate myself..in your lines...i like your style though...so sad....bUt still great!!..

give you 5/5!... *smiles*

-bryan

Wow, this poem is lovely.
I like the flow of it and
the subject. I think you
wrote really well. I give this a 5/5!! :)

Ahh this was just brilliant. A perfect poem. Unique way to give to the liar apperance of puppet master in an relationship, and loved your imagery! Taking scense from real life and relating them with puppet / theater world. I so loved it. I think it had powerful end. Going on my favs.
5/5

I love the way you right. Each poem I've read, I think, is amazing. Your word choice is quite wonderful here. I was unable to look awy from beining to end. Another 5/5 from me. I think I will add you to my favorites.

marcella

I could picture this all in my head.. I love the way that you describe yourself in your poems. this poem really sucked me in

great jobb

5/5

I love this.
The thing that struck me the most is how creative and unique it is. It's certainly not like any other poem I've ever seen. && Your vocabulary is just flawless, it truly is. Wonderful job. :]] 5.5

-- Stephanie

A well penned piece, strong wording and emotions. You are a great writer!

Best wishes,

5/5 Ingrid

Excellent poem! i love it. you wrote it so well, even tho it didnt rhyme its still a really good poem. 5/5 keep up the great work.

xx love

I loved the idea for this poem and the metaphores were wonderful very unique not anywhere close to some of the other bland metahores that I've read on this site before. The things that I can say that would make this poem a bit better would be if you fixed the last line. For some reason I belive that it doesnt fit as well. I think that its because a mascuarade is a masked ball not something that can be played, and I know that its a metaphore but it just sort of throw the whole poem off. Nice job as a whole though.