by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Aug 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
If you ever need me call me on the phone |
Good old kyp. ah but seriously, great poem, good job |
Well as for the last line i have never heard the word so i am no help to that..but overall the poem was good and I liked the little dream of the future love life that you could share with your counterpart..flow was a bit choppy in some areas but overall it went well..definitely could feel the lovey doveyness. Keep up the great work! |