Echoes of the old line 'children should be seen and not heard' - not calling you a kid here - i'm just stressing how that mindset has affected the feeling of the words in the poem. They carry a deep emotion that I think we keep often keep hidden from the world. It's always comforting to know that others feel the same sense of sinking in to the dark, hazy backdrop against the world. I'm rambling. I loved the poem. I particularly like 'mute in this lonely world'. it seemed to sound more effective that i've ever managed. I hope to see more poems from you.

I absolutely LOVED this poem...I feel the same way and you worded it in a way that I always wish I could have...nice job!

Brooke<3

This poem stated exactly how i feel most of the time! it's weird i long 4 atention but wen i get it i push them away. well any way i like ur styel of writing keep it up. 5/5

You have a nice style. keep writing. and yeah, this poem is really easy to relate to.
keep up the gr8 work!

Thats really good. keep writing. 5/5

Awh, this is really good. I don't know why, but it's really making me emotional. =) Anyways, keep it up! =D

-Taylor

OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK, this very good! keep it up