Lifesavers

by QuietDreamer   Aug 23, 2007


I awake each morning
without you by my side.
Why'd you have to leave me
Alone I am forced to suffer.

After you departed
a piece of me left with you,
Leaving an empty hole within my heart.
The only trace you left behind
was the pack of lifesavers half eaten.

I awake each morning and eat two,
one for me, and the other for you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sapphire

    I really like this poem. And how you put candy in it was a nice touch.

  • 17 years ago

    by crazyXCrunner

    Gr8 poem.
    sad, but gr8.
    keep up the good work, and comment my piece when you get the chance.

  • 17 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    That was so sweet, i love it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Aw, that was so sweet...another great write!

    Brooke<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    An excellent writing..

    Me the 1st reader, 1st voter and the 1st to comment this poem with great pleasure. You have done a better job with pretty good feelings. I like your style... its worth to me..

    Nazeer

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