An excellent writing..

Me the 1st reader, 1st voter and the 1st to comment this poem with great pleasure. You have done a better job with pretty good feelings. I like your style... its worth to me..

Nazeer

Aw, that was so sweet...another great write!

Brooke<3

That was so sweet, i love it. 5/5

Gr8 poem.
sad, but gr8.
keep up the good work, and comment my piece when you get the chance.

I really like this poem. And how you put candy in it was a nice touch.