Well a powerful piece.. (i can smell someone wanting some revenge in here) did i got it right? well most probably not so wicked revenge just wanting to express your anger and wanted to let that person feel what you felt... nice piece! no need for negative feedback coz u made it an impressive and unique poem.

Great poem and every girl that reads this is on your side, hoping you win this fight=]

Wow...That was really good...
The flow was really good..
&& It held a lot of anger in this poem...
But it was written just right, I'm sure a lot of people feel like this...
5/5... =)

That was powerful, it was so strong and showed power and was inspirational yet sad.
You put together an awesome poem, that really made me want to read.
well done
love Tara-Kay
x

Wow for some reason,i really like this one. 5/5

Marvelous! u've done a great job,,

words.. are very meaningful and the structure was great.. very awesome emotion keep it up5/5

Amazing piece.
The emotions are so true.
I can feel what you are
saying. I like your poems.
Keep it up. :) a definently
5/5!!

This is a good poem which flows well and has a good word choice. Keep it up 5/5

Tc
Fsamns

I can sense u felt angry when you write this poem but its very well written and ilove it
xx

Nicely written, like the way it is directed at the person to try and make them see how they have been behaving. Flow isn't bad either.

xxx

A very well written poem showing a lot of emotion and some good imagery I wasn’t sure about the way you ended it but over all it was good.

I like every stanza except the last one because it isn't too effective. Anyway this poem has good flow and atmosphere is great.

I loved this one as well, one thing I found though is you need to check your grammar over. A few words in your poem were missing grammar.. "something`s" and "don`t" . Other than that there was just one other thing I found, in the line.."beg for you to stay" should there be an "I" at the beginning of that? Anyways, besides those things you did a really good job once again. You`re still young..but you got a really great talent.

"I could tear your heart out,
And stomp it on the floor.
Shred it to tiny pieces,
Until its not together anymore."

^^ LOVE that stanza.

5.5
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