Broken hearted

by Tracy D Rollings   Aug 23, 2007


It hurts me all over
heart feels heavy
mind won't think
tears keep falling
hurt sets in
nerves are shot
feeling alone
angry with myself
hating someone else
pain takes over
no one cares
why must I suffer
when will it stop
hope fades away
love is all gone
nothing left now
but a name
chiseled in stone..©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shauna

    Brilliantly written! The flow is great and your words are full of emotion..another great work!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaz

    Awesome poemm.. hats off. on this one.. in such short lines you have expressed so much..shows u really felt this..

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    Very sad and haunting piece. Heartfelt emotions.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Phil

    Another powerful poem Tracy D I enjoyed reading it keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Ewww short and powerful. I wish you the best of luck babe. I love the part of nothing left but the name chiseled in stone.

    I have often felt that way myself, in fact I still do today.

    --Sher