Great ending...it really tied all the feelings together and explained the whole piece. Good job!
Charisma*

This is very , very , very sad poem...=(
Every word expresses your pain,...it is beautifully written and very powerfull,...short and clear..5/5..Your Fan...Melody...=)

That was great i loved how it was so short but delirverd such strong feelings at the same time

Hey man i know i may be only 16 but ive learnd you cant always dwel on the past and look at the better in the future, i know its hard i am trying myself so i guess i cant say to much...just a thought man good luck and keep you head up

Really well written 5/5 from me

This poem is excellent. You created great atmosphere with just a few words. It is very powerful and emotions are superbly expressed. It is also very original. 5/5

Very strong feelings in this poem.
A sad poem to read.
Take care

Short yet so powerful, filled with sadness and greatly written. I can relate to this poem, it reminds me on some things that happened in my life.
Well done, keep writing!
5/5 from me

I haven't read such a unique style in well..NEVER!!! I'm loving it! I love how you say it all without saying it all. I know especially for ME...it's easy to get carried away with words. You said so MUCH by saying so little - that's impressive!....WOW! I love this piece!!! Nice write my friend.

Aww, thats really sad. Great work.

Ewww short and powerful. I wish you the best of luck babe. I love the part of nothing left but the name chiseled in stone.

I have often felt that way myself, in fact I still do today.

--Sher

Another powerful poem Tracy D I enjoyed reading it keep up the good work

Tracy
Very sad and haunting piece. Heartfelt emotions.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy

Awesome poemm.. hats off. on this one.. in such short lines you have expressed so much..shows u really felt this..

Brilliantly written! The flow is great and your words are full of emotion..another great work!

5.5**
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