Hey! I liked this poem a lot! But if I may ask, is there a hint of truth hidden inside? Well even so, I can tell that you wrote this with your heart and I love that about your poems. They're so true! I give you a 5/5!!Great job!

Awww.. Ichy!! This is such a beautiful, sad poem! Sure, it's a little short, but you packed so much emotion into it! You did such a wonderful job with this piece, truly flawless! I can relate to this, I've been through this exact same thing before. Keep writing girl!! Love ya =) 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~

My favorite♥
keep it up
5/5

It's awsome I felt a lot when I read this poem it's amazing.