by Alex Aug 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I've been alone |
by Robert
Very intresting I liked it for starters. The flow was good but you got along ways before your work matures that will come with time and alot of effort check out my work when you get time would love to hear your opinion about mine. Take care and keep writing |
I like the ending best "except my heart" good stuff. |