Wintry Snow [haiku, 4 stanzas]

Superb my dear. I loved your haikus. Its really worth comments and votes. Well described and unique. 5/5

Tc
Fsams

You got me, you took me to a place i had long forgotten, back to a sweet memory of another time, of once upon a better life...thanks

I like haikus..they're always about nature..=)
and you made a beautiful piece of literature here!! ^__^

it's just sad that we don't have winter where i come from..X_X

Nice..i have yet to try a haiku..but this seem to work well..the flow was good and they seemed to fit and make larger picture together. Good job.

This was interesting, from reading your last poem and this one, you have a niche for nature...the streams and snowflakes...really beautiful...just a couple suggestions on this one

"These fragile life of winter"

This might need some rephrasing or to change these to this or life to lives but I thinks it screws up the syllabals. And there the last stanza:
With thoughts of sweet love
And beauty of perfect peace
Be a white sight.

I am not really sure what this means, it kind of doesnt make sense...you might omit it or find another ending, the other 3 haikus are strong enough to support it as a complete poem alone without the 4th stanza....Really good job though! 5/5