This is so simply stated yet so profoundly true. You have really captured a deepness and understanding of life so perfectly. Very well written and expressed. A great poem that warrants re-reading.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

You give here good lesson. maybe its the real meaning oflife. nice thoughts and words you have used. great work i will give you 5/5 because you deserve it.
take care

That is so goo d

Now i know who i am, well i figured out the secret of life thats why i said for every poem written there is a secret inside and you have just proved thats for me, i shall do what i feel and never scared to show the world who am i. well written poem as you rhym nice at your 2nd stanza as usually.

Hey sorry it took me sooo long to check 'em out...buuut I really like it...you speak from the heart, and thats the best way to go!

~Much luvs~