An excellent, heartfiled tribute, lot of real emotions in this piece...and i like how you made it so that it was double spaced..it gave it a different vibe which made it that much better...amazing work yet again cindy, take care

Cindy dear, yet another beautiful poems you penned here, yet well dedication... "Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul. Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal." i hope things are good with you my dear friend, and always know if you need someone to hear. take care.

Bert. ~

Cindy, its really a sad poem. True there are forgotten souls whom some sees as burdens and some simply forget them ,you have translated your experince with complete honesty.It really moves the reader.Glad you are safely in safety and love of family and dear ones.Take care .

Best wishes
chavii.

Cindy, very pleased to have noticed this poem. As always this was awesome, it was so sad and touching and extremely emotional.
well done my dear friend,
Tara-Kay
xxx

Thats just horrible knowing that there are people like that :-( Breaks my heart so much.......I understand if you have an OK excuse for putting someone in a home....you know if don't live in the greatest of neighborhoods and don't make enough money to support them....but even then...theres ways around that and people who can help care for your sick loved one while living in your home....This is such an unfortunate thing that I wish I could just find the time to go into a nursing home and put smiles on all those peoples faces...one day I surely will!!
Blesss you Cindy for having a heart for hurting people :-)
Chelsey

Wow i like the way you write... i this poem was amazingly written... full of meanings..
i give 5/5

A beautiful and touching poem 5/5 i'm glad your family didn't leave you in a nursing home, alone.. this piece is very tear-shedding

xD
~NinjaGirl~

This must be everyones worst nightmare..to end up in a home!
I'm glad you survived! You are brave ideed!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Cindy.....you've captured these feelings so beautifully....sad and true....what's even more tragic than those trapped in nursing homes....are those poor souls trapped in their minds.....no escape.....

This poem is wonderfully written. It's came straight from the heart. I'm glad you're no longer there and that you had people that care enough to bring you home. THat's great!

This poems is beautiful and full of emotion a true 5/5

Nice sad poem Cindy and its good that you have that care for you, stay cool!

It was very deep.. i loved the style of your poem great job 5/5

Grt poem... 5/5

Wow thats one of your very powerful pieces, i can't believe they did that to you but thats great they brought you home well dedication and shout out about the reality of homes and what it can feel like. xox sam

It is so sad to feel alone. A heartfelt piece. Nice job!

Wow really great poem 5/5 <33