Some Favors of Love

by Kenny   Aug 23, 2007


*Please be kind enough in finishing the poem if you do have started*

By the time i write this poem
So dark, so cold, a complicated dome
Her presence is dominating above all
Love so true and pure, breaking walls

I love her more than you'd ever know
Words filled with romance can't ever show
There's this feeling of horrifying fear
I whisper by my own, voices you can't even hear

I sincerely wrote this message to notify all
I wish to gather all of you in a silent hall
to intentionally discuss an important matter
because if the day will come, you'll all know
of how much i love her

There's this fact that someone will depart
Or just leave alone and being torn apart
A fact that will happen sooner or later
that causes me chills, my nights blow colder

A reality that seems so hard to avoid
runs to my veins makes me so annoyed
my mind and heart had collaborated
to prepare for the things i mostly hated

I will really miss the beauty she posses
the thoughtfulness and the way of her caress
I will remember her voice so delicate so innocent
her fragrant smell and lovely scent

the way she walks so gracefully
the bouncing of her hair so smoothly
her laughters i sometimes catch
and angelic eyes i cant evade to watch

the memories we've shared i treasure
the moments together was much of a pleasure
the smiles that often landed to me
I love her, that will always be

there's a few favors of mine
not a favor of six, seven, eight or nine
If the time i will soon depart
Can you please take care of her, to fill my
my missing part

don't let her live alone by her own
please, let her fell the love i shown
if she does, and will soon cry
be there by her side, and wipe her eye

if she do have a lot of problem
please, help her and play with them
I can't be there by her side always
and bring back those happy days

I will again ask you a favor....
I know, you'll never fail me for sure
Will you please secure my love and take care of her

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    This poem is really well written
    well done
    xx