Catch up with myself.

by charlotte   Aug 23, 2007


[ PLEASE, give me credit for this. I DID write it, its the least I deserve. ]

Today the sun didn't rise.
my dreams full of stressful cries,
today the world stood still,
waiting for me to see everything
that is real, And I cant stand this
life and its ridiculous beliefs.
about love, friendship hate and greed.

I sit back and watch my life
speed past me.
Not knowing what I'm doing or where I'm going
too confusing to realize
I cant wait to catch up with myself.

Life is slowing down and I can finally hear
the sound of my own heart beating, beating beating stopped.
I listen close and take down the clock,
the only thing proving that my time is being lost.

Today the sun shone bright across the sky.
A helpful hand reached out to me.
Today the world spun fast.
All around me as I gasp,
for air the sound gets louder.
leaving me breathless, breaking breaking breaking free.

And I cant wait to catch up with myself.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dream within a Dream

    Very good i loved it!!! keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by marilyn marti

    Omg..that was one of the best poems i EVER read! HONESTLY! it was sooo well put together..i especially loved and i mean LOVED the lines..
    "I listen close and take down the clock,
    the only thing proving that my time is being lost."<<<sooo sad..its like you took something i feel and explained it in the best way possible..like time being lost..wow..thanks so much for posting..i am going to add it as one of my favorite poems! great job..post some more!

    Best wishes, Marilyn.

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Heey loved the poem, keep it up ;)

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