Uhmm not very interesting to me. lol. but it has a good flow so 5/5 :]

Short and sweet poem. I like th epoem very much and it has good rhymes plus its very well penned. 5/5

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Fsams

Short and sweet poem. I like th epoem very much and it has good rhymes plus its very well penned. 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Atmosphere is interesting and imagery is great. Emotions could be better expressed. This poem is good but it isn't excellent.